Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 7 and my teacher is Ms Hansen. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wednesday, May 6, 2020
Day 42 of lock down
We went for a walk at sunset today. The sky was so beautiful like paint mixing on a palette . The moon was so round like a rice biscuit. I must be going crazy in hunger.
During the walk, I made a poem for Mum!
If I bought Mum a yacht
She will say yikes!
and ask why did i bought her a yacht
and that I should have bought her a bike.
Her yacht is four stories high,
So high it will reach the sky,
If she needs to go to the loo,
She just opens the window to poo.
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Hi John
ReplyDeleteAnother great post John. I like the descriptive way you have described the sunset and the moon. Great poem but I'm not sure Mum will like the last line. Keep these post coming I look forward to the next one.
Steve
Hi Steve,
ReplyDeleteThank you. Mum wasn't amused ;)