Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 7 and my teacher is Ms Hansen. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, July 2, 2020
Writing W5
Hello everyone ,
To day for writing war had to pick from 3 stories and a do a short story before you do the story you have to do a graphic organiser. I picked the Creature from the deep .
This is what i my graphic organiser looks like :
And this is my story :
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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