Hello,
Today i made a dam and I really enjoyed myself. I was really fun piling the little stones between the big stones.
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Hello,
Today i made a dam and I really enjoyed myself. I was really fun piling the little stones between the big stones.
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Hey John,
ReplyDeleteGreat work on your dam, nice to see you're going back to complete some earlier tasks you missed. You dam looks like it worked really well. It's cool that you have so many stones to work with, it makes so many of your posts unique. Did you make this at the Rakaia Gorge too or at home?
Nice work Mark,
See you later on the comments,
Daniel
Hi Daniel,
ReplyDeleteI made this dam at Margaret Mahy Playground ;)
From John
Hey John,
ReplyDeleteOh wow that's super cool, I read lots of her books as a kid and to kids but I didn't know there was a playground named after her. It looks really cool.
Hi Daniel,
ReplyDeleteIf you come to christchurch you must go there it is really nice,big and there is a lot to do there.
From John